Terms & Conditions
Our Free deal (limited spots available)
1. What You Get (The Deal)
I’m editing the first 10,000 words of your manuscript completely free. Here’s everything included:
Inline Comments: Line-by-line notes directly on your manuscript + recommendations on how to improve.
Overall Feedback: High-level editorial notes covering my big picture advice and recommendations.
5-Minute Video Breakdown: A quick video outlining my general thoughts and takeaways.
Q&A Follow-up: Your choice between a 15-minute live video call via Google Meet OR a 7-question Q&A form to get your specific questions answered.
2. Eligibility & Selection
Limited strictly to the first 5 authors who submit their manuscripts. First come, first served.
Your submission must be the opening/first 10,000 words of a fiction manuscript.
3. The Trade (Your Testimonial & Marketing rights)
In exchange for the free edit, you agree to send over a 30-second video testimonial.
Just talk honestly about your experience working with me, what helped, and how the feedback felt. I will provide a rough outline if you’re unsure what to say but I will not give you a script to read.
Video testimonials must be submitted within 7 days of receiving your completed feedback and before you can claim the Q&A.
By submitting, you grant permission for your video testimonial, name, avatar, and the fact that we worked together to be used in marketing, social media, and promotional materials.
4. Intellectual Property & Privacy
Your work remains 100% yours. You retain full ownership and copyright of your manuscript at all times.
Your manuscript will never be shared, posted, or used anywhere else without your explicit permission.
5. General Good Faith
This is a casual, value-first offer designed to help you get solid feedback while helping me build social proof.
Turnaround times will be communicated upfront upon submission.